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Friendship ? |
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Scott New Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 2 |
Friendship ? It came between a families love, strength and bond Disguised as friendship... But something was wrong For how could true friendship want you to ache... For the love and life they ask you to forsake We ache too... But it doesn't have to be A families love is for eternity RAS This is my first atempt at writting,and this was written out of experience....I wish my daughter could only read it. Thanks for letting me share my pain...it can only get better. [This message has been edited by Scott (edited 03-04-2000).] |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
A very heartfelt piece Scott...and very well written. I truly hope things get better for you. |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
Welcome to Passions, Scott. I too thought this a very good first piece. Liked your message about how it can only get better, too. very heartfelt and emotional piece. Share with us some more and we will keep listening. Chinese fortune cookie say: There are many unexpected & thrilling surprises in store for you. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! I look forward to reading more of your work. Please check your email for a special welcome...  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Welcome to passions Scott...looking forward to reading more  |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
You are so right! It can only get better. Keep good thoughts and let out your pain through writing. I know it helps me. So, keep posting here! Joy |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Hi Scott and welcome to passions...VERY impressive piece for your first time...well written and expressed. writing is a very healing experience, take care, janet marie ...every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. every poem and song... every rhyme and verse... your still here...like a beautiful curse. janet marie |
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