Dark Poetry #1 |
Melody of My Heart #4 |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Melody of my heart, song of my life You wonder if it's worth it, all of this strife Is it really worth the pain that you endure? Is it really worth it? I know why you're not so sure. To find the light, you must rage against the dark The darkness that has engulfed you and left its mark You feel alone, you wonder if anyone cares One has come forward, one has taken the dare. Though I cannot be with you, my spirit fills your heart It's always been there,and has been from the start And when the strife is over, and you have passed the test I'll be here at the end, arms wide open, to give you rest. ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
This is beautiful Sven...I'm gonna show it to a friend of mine that is having a very tough time right now. I think it'll speak to her as it has to me. Well done. "They can take away my belongings. They can beat me. They can torchure me and they can kill me. Then they will have my dead body. But they will not have my obedience." -Gandhi ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
My fingers are crossed Sven May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sven, this is so BEAUTIFUL and sweet...so romantic...Isis..I'll cross a few things too jm When you see through love's illusions, there lies the danger... And your perfect lover just looks like a perfect fool So you go running off in search of a perfect stranger While the loneliness seems to spring from your life Like a fountain from a pool. Jackson Browne |
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gypsyqlt Member
since 2000-02-08
Posts 147Bradford,Vt USA |
Sven, I love this ! Very nice piece. Hey, i'll catch up with you and the PFF thing soon, ok ? Jocelyn |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
This poem is soooo beautiful! It speaks right from the heart, and into the soul. |
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