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Dark Poetry #1

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devinmaria
Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 130
Middletown, Ohio

0 posted 2000-03-02 07:56 PM

confessions and obsessions
regrets and faults
tears and laughter
these four walls

feelings and anger
sadness and thoughts
poetry in the making
these four walls

hatred and compassion
love and it's loss
confusion and madness
these four walls

lonely and questioning
rising and falls
empty and lonely
these four white walls

rage and impulses
lonely i crawl
outlined on the floor
with four white walls

Trust I seek and I find in you. Everyday for us something new. Open mind for a different view, and nothing else matters. --Metallica

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

1 posted 2000-03-02 08:20 PM

Well done hon. Hope you venture out from those four walls soon

May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-03-02 08:29 PM

wow, this is powerful and expressive. very well written, I like the continuing theme running thru it. jm

When you see through love's illusions, there lies the danger...
And your perfect lover just looks like a perfect fool
So you go running off in search of a perfect stranger
While the loneliness seems to spring from your life
Like a fountain from a pool.

Jackson Browne

sonjes
Senior Member

since 2000-02-18

Posts 564
North Carolina

3 posted 2000-03-02 08:59 PM

Oh my! The pictures in my head of a person writhing in a room with nothing but her emotions. How incredibly graphic you have made this for me. Powerful! With such simple phrases and single words, you have created something strong.

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