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star83 Junior Member
since 2000-02-27
Posts 26SD |
A transparent web woven of cloudy silt Dangling dew drops dripping from the thread-like quilt Its stunning aroma full of celestial bliss As though the angels above had gently spun this Overwhelming senses trying to snap From wakeness, now lay in a thick, sleepy sap The tremor within my heart tells me to wake But the dreamer inside whispers not to surrender the fate But slowly I see the light just beyond As I float away from this soft, hazy pond I wake and upon approaching the day Sit back in bed for awhile, just to lay |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Beautiful poem star...loved the imagery. "They can take away my belongings. They can beat me. They can torchure me and they can kill me. Then they will have my dead body. But they will not have my obedience." -Gandhi ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
excellent, perfect rhyme and perfectly visual...well written. It was a nice read! take care, janet marie When you see through love's illusions, there lies the danger... And your perfect lover just looks like a perfect fool So you go running off in search of a perfect stranger While the loneliness seems to spring from your life Like a fountain from a pool. Jackson Browne |
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