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Your Heart Is Fake |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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*if JML can post old ones, I will too  *I saw something special in your eyes but it was just a clever disguise You let me think your heart was true but I was just a game to you You used and hurt me even though you knew just how much I cared for you Well, now I know your heart is fake and you were my biggest mistake! -SEA- [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 03-01-2000).] |
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devinmaria Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 130Middletown, Ohio |
simple but great flow to it. i loved the way it read for me. and oh believe me ive been there. broken hearts have been my forte` for some time. gteat poem. aimee Trust I seek and I find in you. Everyday for us something new. Open mind for a different view, and nothing else matters. --Metallica |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
Ah, if I had ONLY ONE "biggest mistake." OF course, I am wondering as of late, if there is a real heart out there. Nothing wrong with posting from your archives. Especially when it is as pointed as this. The game will hurt every time, won't it? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
sea , this is perfect, i relate WAY too much to it...  an oldie but goodie..LOL nicely expressed.jmNow for me some words come easy But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch You never knew what I loved in you I don't know what you loved in me Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be... Jackson Browne *I miss you baby... I love you...always. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Everyone~ thanks -SEA |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Sea glad to see you did post an oldy but a goody. This was simple but flowed well and stated your point with strength May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
I didn't think it would be any problem posting old ones...sometimes those are better. This one was a good one. Oldie and goodie. *S* |
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