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Sonnet for her...

star83
Junior Member

since 2000-02-27

Posts 26
SD

0 posted 2000-02-29 08:09 PM

I wrote this for a guy friend of mine who was totally smitten by this girl hehe and this is what I came up with...

The brightest star shown through her eyes
Resplendent in a radiant shape,
With lips so pure, bring breath to thee
From thine very soul; thou wilt die
Every flowing lock of golden sun
Cascaded glass 'round the frame,
Hath swayed a steady gaze
A Love begun;
Yet uncertainty swims the air about
To feel her kiss upon my brow,
A longing only one can adore
A sense of wholeness keeps throughout
Comfort of Truth that warms the heart
Bid unto these lips, that n'er will part

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

1 posted 2000-03-01 05:55 AM

Aah when love is new and perfect *sigh* well done

May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-03-01 04:48 PM

wow, this is a beautiful poem...I love it..emotionally and visually satisfying

The brightest star shown through her eyes
Resplendent in a radiant shape,
With lips so pure, bring breath to thee
From thine very soul; thou wilt die
Every flowing lock of golden sun
Cascaded glass 'round the frame,
Hath swayed a steady gaze
A Love begun;

perfect poem!!! jm

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