Reflections on a Foggy Night

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PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2000-02-29 11:41 AM

JML,
I found this to be an intriguing piece to say the least. Still, there are guidelines we have to follow - therefore I have edited out the content of this poem. Please feel free to read the guidelines and resubmit this poem if you decide you wish to edit to be within the guidelines.

Thank you,

Michael

[This message has been edited by Michael (edited 03-01-2000).]

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-02-29 03:13 PM

I hear chimes
From distant bells
Tolling for someone
Just like me
But the sound is out of reach
As is the fog flowing about
Heavenly choir fills the air
Haunting melody rips my ears
And they bleed as I cry
No one is alive
And I am dead
There’s nothing now
No sound nor light
Just darkness and fog

oooh this one is really DARK..were you having a bad day

...excellent imagery.
I'm almost scared to ask where this one's inspiration comes from(smile)
stalkin on.....jm

You're going to hear my voice in the morning calling your name
And know my love and my desperation were one and the same...
Baby it's alright...
Take this pain and all this sadness
It's alright
Take this rain
You're going to be free...
Jackson Browne
*I love you baby*

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

2 posted 2000-02-29 03:39 PM

This was a highschool one. I was up late as usual, and it was fog rolling in...and i was looking out the window and saw a black cat. Heavily Poe influenced, can you tell? LOL...

Jannel
Member

since 2000-01-18

Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA

3 posted 2000-03-01 01:44 AM

creepy eerie shivvvvvvers! some awesome word usages, though.
jannel

"I'm just saying
that we've mistaken one
for thousands of words,
and for that mistake
I've caused you such pain
that I damn that word."
-10000 Maniacs "Jezebel"

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

4 posted 2000-03-01 05:58 AM

JML a good poem the ending went a bit violent though, so I close the poem. Email me if you have a problem with it.

May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

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