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Reflections on a Foggy Night
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Reflections on a Foggy Night |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
JML, I found this to be an intriguing piece to say the least. Still, there are guidelines we have to follow - therefore I have edited out the content of this poem. Please feel free to read the guidelines and resubmit this poem if you decide you wish to edit to be within the guidelines. Thank you, Michael [This message has been edited by Michael (edited 03-01-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I hear chimes From distant bells Tolling for someone Just like me But the sound is out of reach As is the fog flowing about Heavenly choir fills the air Haunting melody rips my ears And they bleed as I cry No one is alive And I am dead There’s nothing now No sound nor light Just darkness and fog oooh this one is really DARK..were you having a bad day  ...excellent imagery.I'm almost scared to ask where this one's inspiration comes from(smile) stalkin on.....jm You're going to hear my voice in the morning calling your name And know my love and my desperation were one and the same... Baby it's alright... Take this pain and all this sadness It's alright Take this rain You're going to be free... Jackson Browne *I love you baby* |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
This was a highschool one. I was up late as usual, and it was fog rolling in...and i was looking out the window and saw a black cat. Heavily Poe influenced, can you tell? LOL... |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
creepy eerie shivvvvvvers! some awesome word usages, though. jannel "I'm just saying that we've mistaken one for thousands of words, and for that mistake I've caused you such pain that I damn that word." -10000 Maniacs "Jezebel" |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
JML a good poem the ending went a bit violent though, so I close the poem. Email me if you have a problem with it. May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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