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~Venus~ Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128 |
Opening my eyes, I see a world, mysterious, yet familiar. I look around, for any sign of life. I walk, forward and forward, searching, searching, until I see something moving. I shade my eyes, trying to see the lone creature before me. But I can't. "Who's there?" I scream. But no one answers. I am alone. ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~ I'll be here...why? I'll be waiting...for what? 'll be waiting for you so...if you come here, you'll find me... I promise. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Been there... sometimes we only think someone is there. Beautiful poem. Held an eerie essence. Loved it. Michael |
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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
You can never really tell who...what is there...with you... "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Another fraction of this could be you saw yourself? The darker you? Anyways, liked this and it's eerie quality  May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
One is the loneliest number that you'll ever know. James |
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