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Dark Poetry #1

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~Venus~
Member

since 2000-01-27

Posts 128

0 posted 2000-02-26 07:58 AM

Opening my eyes,
I see
a world,
mysterious,
yet familiar.
I look around,
for any sign of life.
I walk, forward and forward,
searching, searching,
until I see
something moving.
I shade my eyes,
trying to see the lone creature before me.

But I can't.

"Who's there?" I scream.
But no one answers.

I am alone.

~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

I'll be here...why? I'll
be waiting...for what?
'll be waiting for you
so...if you come here,
you'll find me...

I promise.

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

1 posted 2000-02-26 10:38 AM

Been there... sometimes we only think someone is there. Beautiful poem. Held an eerie essence. Loved it.

Michael

TanAngel
Member

since 2000-02-01

Posts 168
Oviedo, Florida, USA

2 posted 2000-02-26 03:09 PM

You can never really tell who...what is there...with you...

"Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

3 posted 2000-02-26 06:35 PM

Another fraction of this could be you saw yourself? The darker you?
Anyways, liked this and it's eerie quality

May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2000-03-01 07:01 AM

One is the loneliest number that you'll ever know. James

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