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~My Heart Senses The Change~
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
~My Heart Senses The Change~ Something inside of me is now uneasy and strange... unsure of myself...my heart senses the change. Shadows replace where the light once use to play, there's an ache in my soul ... where you use to stay. This distance now between us, is more than my mind can conceive, the loss my heart feels is more than just my tears can relieve. I loved you more than my last breath, but you were taken away, this pain is so hard to get past, the emptiness seems here to stay. Now that you are gone, I'm not sure what's left of me, when two is changed in to one...a future is so hard to see. How does a heart hold the love ... and still let go of the pain, how does a soul heal, while allowing the love to remain. I know I just need to give myself ... a little more time... I console myself writing you these sad verses that rhyme. In time this pain will pass, and my heart will again breathe, until then, I continue to live in the constant of this love...in you I still believe. Janet Marie 1.15.00 She says baby, It's 3am I must be lonely, When she says baby, Well I can't help but be scared of it all sometimes, Says the rains gonna wash away I believe it. Matchbox20 I love you baby... always.* |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
The pain will pass Janet. . . from your heart to your pen. . . and in its place the sun will shine once again. . . Thank you, this says a lot to me. . .especially tonight. .. --------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~Janet... you've made the "sunshine" girl cry...this broke my heart, but at the same time...this is another stage of healing and grieving. this pain you feel now, wont last forever. you will smile and love again. i promise. always believe in yourself, and those who care about u. amy  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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star83 Junior Member
since 2000-02-27
Posts 26SD |
WOW, good sentence structure. It flowed together quite nicely. I feel the love and pain poured into this poem. To loose someone so dear is very hard and all I can offer is my comfort and sympathy.. |
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devinmaria Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 130Middletown, Ohio |
thank you janet for touching my soul. this one reached right in and grabbed me. i think this one is about me, am i right? lol. seriously, its wonderfully expressed and very moving. i hope all your pain subsides. in the meantime keep writing these wonderful pieces of poetry that make me think. aimee Trust I seek and I find in you. Everyday for us something new. Open mind for a different view, and nothing else matters. --Metallica |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
touch a heart imprint your love i am pure with your touch i am what i was unsoiled touching deeply my pain subsides And my heart once again opens Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace, of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd |
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blueyz75 Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 138IL |
Once again, sniff sniff  I love the male body, it's better designed than the male mind.---Andrea Newman |
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jenifeather Junior Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 31Here |
that was amazing. it espesially got to me, i can totally relate. you are a wonderful writer. jennifer |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
very nice, janet, especially Shadows replace where the light once use to play, there's an ache in my soul ... where you use to stay. this is a wonderful expresssion of grief. jannel "I'm just saying that we've mistaken one for thousands of words, and for that mistake I've caused you such pain that I damn that word." -10000 Maniacs "Jezebel" |
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faith Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 89 |
That was wonderul JM and sad ...I know rite now u feel that none can understand wht u r feeling and u r rite....yer pain is yer own..and its different from everyone elses.no matter how may hearthearts are out there....it all depends on how u deal with it!i m sure U KNOW how to fight it!We are with u ...peace faith |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
It's a tough place to be when you know things aren't the same anymore. When two become one the divide back into two, it's hard to visualize any future at all. Good poem, Janet. Michael |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
How to start again, when half of you is gone? It is hard, beautiful work Janet May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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