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Barefoot and Dancing (I)
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
There are two of these with the same theme, but they're proposed in completely different ways. Barefoot and Dancing (I) Platforms, stillettos, flats, Sneakers, boots, galloshes, Velvet and leather Canvas and wood Magenta Mahogany Eggplant Azure Boat shoes, fuzzy slippers (leopard print!) Sandals and spurs A pair for her sweater And one for that dress (the green sequined one) For moonlight, marching, marathons, mass, For climbing mountains, For floating across seashores Approaching the dance floor Amazed stares meet het feet Red ruby sparkles or strappy patent leather Give way to (perfectly painted) toes Barefoot and dancing The only way to live Toes make love to the ground Pure emotion Unafraid of being tread upon Barefoot and dancing True love can never be halfway No ballet slippers No tap shoes Could make her collection more complete Than no dancing shoes at all |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
another good poem well done Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace, of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
something a little different, and great! i enjoyed this one very much. well done, jannel. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I enjoyed the differences in this.. good work  May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
This is wonderful!! "True love can never be halfway. . ." how true.. . Beautiful work, my friend. . . --------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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