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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
0 posted 1999-09-24 01:44 PM

Rock the cradle
hums the silence,
swaddle the aching story
in soft memories lullaby.

Push again
the breath of morning
into the arms
of waiting listen
before the wail
and stench of dying
digest the offering
of my needful retrospect.

Become the giggles
and glee of summer's lasting
when again
yur are my whimsy
and I your wiseom.
© Copyright 1999 Martie Odell Ingebretsen - All Rights Reserved
donovan blue
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 26
austin,tx,usa
1 posted 1999-09-25 09:48 PM

Absolutely incredible...
Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
2 posted 1999-09-27 12:34 PM

Fabulous piece, Martie.
i loved the ending. Hope to see more from you here.

Michael
JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
3 posted 1999-09-28 10:05 AM

Rock the cradle
Hums the silence....
This drew me right in.
A pleasure to read!

Jenny
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