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Aiden Kelly Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148Ft. Wayne, IN USA |
I wrote this on my way home from my vacation last summer to Pueblo, Colorado. ~Colorado~ The wind breathes -- My hair flies wildly My soul is quiet My heart is calmed. The mountains stand -- My eyes are in awe My spirit soars My heart is strengthened. The waters sing -- My ears memorize the lullaby My mind is at peace My heart ia at home. This is my home. This is God's country. This is Colorado. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
well, I'm smiling now...you know I've been waiting for this  Welcome to passions!!! this is so great...I could feel the calmness and peace you felt in the awe of that special place. I hope to see it one day. I'm glad your here. take care, janet marie ...there are places inside all our souls... that have never been touched... there are places inside our hearts... that need to be loved this much... Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
And you were worried? Beautiful, my dear. Especially "my ears memorize the lullabye"  Jannel "I'm just saying that we've mistaken one for thousands of words, and for that mistake I've caused you such pain that I damn that word." -10000 Maniacs "Jezebel" |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome Aiden to the dark forum and passions. This was a beautiful piece full of majesty. I know the feeling you describe. I have always admired Colorado and if I ever make it to the US of A I will go there. All of us should stop and let the senses truly experience places such as this. Well done May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Lady Bere Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 73Valmeyer, Illinois USA |
Welcome! This was wonderful. I look forward to future poems from you! Without darkness there is no light Without the light we cannot see the dark Balance...It heals the soul -- by: LB |
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Aiden Kelly Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148Ft. Wayne, IN USA |
thanks so much all of you! i really appreciate your comments! i was soooo nervous so it really makes me feel more confident now that i know people don't hate this!  ) thanks for the positive feedback! ) |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
What a calming and tranquil poem. beautiful work, Aiden. Welcome to the Dark Forum. Michael |
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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
Wow, close to home...I understand what you are saying...completly... "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
very nice work indeed. looking forward to reading more of your work. i too welcome you! |
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Aiden Kelly Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148Ft. Wayne, IN USA |
thank you all! i was so nervous b/c this is my first post! your comments are a wonderful confidence booster! thanks again! |
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