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Aiden Kelly
Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148
Ft. Wayne, IN USA

0 posted 2000-02-25 09:42 PM


I wrote this on my way home from my vacation last summer to Pueblo, Colorado.

~Colorado~

The wind breathes --
My hair flies wildly
My soul is quiet
My heart is calmed.

The mountains stand --
My eyes are in awe
My spirit soars
My heart is strengthened.

The waters sing --
My ears memorize the lullaby
My mind is at peace
My heart ia at home.

This is my home.
This is God's country.
This is Colorado.


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Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-02-25 10:10 PM


well, I'm smiling now...you know I've been waiting for this    
Welcome to passions!!!
this is so great...I could feel the calmness and peace you felt in the awe of that special place. I hope to see it one day.
I'm glad your here.
take care, janet marie

 ...there are places inside all our souls...
that have never been touched...
there are places inside our hearts...
that need to be loved this much...
Janet Marie

*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*


Jannel
Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA
2 posted 2000-02-25 11:04 PM


And you were worried? Beautiful, my dear. Especially "my ears memorize the lullabye"

Jannel


 "I'm just saying
that we've mistaken one
for thousands of words,
and for that mistake
I've caused you such pain
that I damn that word."
-10000 Maniacs "Jezebel"



Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-02-25 11:19 PM


Welcome Aiden to the dark forum and passions.
This was a beautiful piece full of majesty.
I know the feeling you describe.  I have always admired Colorado and if I ever make it to the US of A I will go there.  
All of us should stop and let the senses truly experience places such as this.
Well done  

 May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Lady Bere
Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 73
Valmeyer, Illinois USA
4 posted 2000-02-26 12:33 PM


Welcome!

This was wonderful.  I look forward to future poems from you!

 Without darkness there is no light
Without the light we cannot see the dark
Balance...It heals the soul -- by: LB



Aiden Kelly
Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148
Ft. Wayne, IN USA
5 posted 2000-02-26 12:05 PM


thanks so much all of you!  i really appreciate your comments!  i was soooo nervous so it really makes me feel more confident now that i know people don't hate this!   )  thanks for the positive feedback!  )
Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
6 posted 2000-02-26 12:36 PM


What a calming and tranquil poem.  beautiful work, Aiden.  Welcome to the Dark Forum.


Michael

TanAngel
Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168
Oviedo, Florida, USA
7 posted 2000-02-26 03:03 PM


Wow, close to home...I understand what you are saying...completly...

 "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel

danni
Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
8 posted 2000-02-27 10:35 PM


very nice work indeed. looking forward to reading more of your work. i too welcome you!  
Aiden Kelly
Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148
Ft. Wayne, IN USA
9 posted 2000-02-28 08:27 PM


thank you all!  i was so nervous b/c this is my first post!  your comments are a wonderful confidence booster!  thanks again!
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