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The Crimson Knight
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The Crimson Knight |
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Lady Bere Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 73Valmeyer, Illinois USA |
CRIMSON KNIGHT Rising out of darkness On his steed of steel He rises up and finds The crimson truth revealed In his eyes shines the sun Under his arm rides the storm Like an eclipse of light He conquers the world Ride upon the apocalypse Know that he will take you Like the crimson truth He rises up from chaos He changes all before him And ends what lays behind Show me the chaotic future Lead me from the past Crimson knight touch my lips And feed upon my soul Without darkness there is no light Without the light we cannot see the dark Balance...It heals the soul -- by: LB |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Lady B, you write with such imagery...and I love the mid-evil touch. where does this creative inspiration come from? take care, janet marie ...there are places inside all our souls... that have never been touched... there are places inside our hearts... that need to be loved this much... Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautiful Lady B!! I adore all your olde worlde poems too  May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Lady Bere Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 73Valmeyer, Illinois USA |
Thank you Janet and Isis. Janet - My inspiration comes from my love of fantasy, sci-fi, and Edgar Allen Poe. Thank you for your kind words. Isis - It is a style I have always liked reading. I guess it shows...  |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Sometimes I feel one would have to be a Knight to rise above the chaos of my life. I saw a lot in these words...great poem. Michael |
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Aiden Kelly Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148Ft. Wayne, IN USA |
i love the imagery! it's so medieval yet futuristic all in a few stanzas. awesome!  ) the imagery reminded me of a passage about the end times in revelation. "Then another horse came out, a fiery red one. Its rider was given power to take peace from the earth and to make men slay each other. To him was given a large sword." (Rev. 6:4) |
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Lady Bere Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 73Valmeyer, Illinois USA |
Thank you both Michael and Aiden. I'm glad my poem touched you. |
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