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AVANTI
Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE

0 posted 2000-02-12 03:28 PM



         Together...forever : )

There’s something about you...it’s in your deep eyes...
I noticed so much...still was so quiet...
You were “my best friend”...I could not lose
With passing time...I have to stop...
Turning to you for good for bad...
In times of pain...that only you seem to cease
To ask “Will you always be there”?

The night of 31st...I’ll never forget...
As I took your hand...the fear just vanished
A part of me…you’ll always be...
I cannot let this feeling die...
And while we danced my heart kept asking...
“Will you always be in my arms?”

It had to be you...I knew from the start...
We stared out as friends...with such simple things..
The world changes...but I’ll always remain...
Just feeling togetherness by walking with you...
We’ll go our distance...miles...and miles


This is for a net friend of mine who can't stop talking about his anushree...his best friend...his love...I had to do this when you asked...niraj...
All the best...for this wonderful begening...





 you don't have to understand completely..to love completely...
remember even the darkest night has a morning to meet...you'll understand someday..Avanti Rao



© Copyright 2000 AVANTI - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-02-12 07:43 PM


Beautiful tribute, I hope they see it and understand  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
2 posted 2000-02-13 01:51 PM


A part of me…you’ll always be...
I cannot let this feeling die...
And while we danced my heart kept asking...
“Will you always be in my arms?”

Beautiful and poignant words. I enjoyed the reading very much.


Jennifer  


[This message has been edited by JennyLee (edited 02-13-2000).]

Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
3 posted 2000-02-14 04:40 AM


Reminds me of a song - "And the world darkens around me".  It's a very painful ordeal to remain the same in emotion while everything changes around you.  You've captured this well.


Michael

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

4 posted 2000-02-25 11:23 PM


AVANTI...
this is a BEAUTIFUL tribute to your friend!!
Im  so sorry I missed it before...
just wanted to say thank you for your sweet replies to my poems...I am touched you relate to them...
COME BACK and post more poetry...we miss your friendly ways...
and I miss your(.........)
we dot - dot - dotters gotta stick together...
(smile)
take care, janet marie

 ...there are places inside all our souls...
that have never been touched...
there are places inside our hearts...
that need to be loved this much...
Janet Marie

*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*


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