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moshpit Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 143cebu, philippines |
When was the last time you were happy, Guile? When was the last time you smiled without faking it? When was the last time you saw the sun rise and set? When was the last time you fed birds in the park? When was the last time you didn't wear a black shirt? When was the last time you said "I love you, Mom."? When was the last time you read Calvin and Hobbes? When was the last time you did something outrageous? When was the last time we had fun together? When was the last time I heard you sing? When was the last time I saw life in those eyes? When was the last time we were happy, Guile? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
mosh...this precious...a wonderful expression of enjoying lifes simpler moments, that so often sneak by us....this is for you>>>>>  haha..okay...any excuse to use an icon!!  < !signature-->...every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. every poem and song... every rhyme and verse... your still here...like a beautiful curse. Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 02-23-2000).] |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Well expressed, I have asked myself those same questions a lot these past couple of years. Well done  May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Your piece speaks of life's little joys yet questions, with concern, if another sees these joys too. I found your poem very sad as I know people that - when I look into their eyes, I see no life - only pain or nothing at all. Very touching poem for me. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
When was the last time I read a very good poem? Just now. . .well written and very aptly stated. . . I always ask myself when the last time I did anything was. . . --------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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