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jenifeather
Junior Member

since 2000-02-21

Posts 31
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0 posted 2000-02-22 09:25 PM

first i want to say thank you to the people that replied to my last poem,well here's another.

You probably can't understand
all the hurt i feel
you simply cast awoy my love
like it was no big deal
I really can't explain it
I won't even try to start
but in a round about backwards way
you broke my heart
the peices scattered on the floor
in a gigantic puddle of tears
filled to overflowing with sobs
and cries that no one hears
yes,i was bawling
bawling over you
over the love i have
and the boyfriend i once knew
the one that said i love you
before each time we'd part
and hold me close, kiss me gently
and just simply melt my heart
but now you push my hand away
and won't look me in the eye
but i don't know what to do
so i just sit here and cry
cause everyday not with you
and each time that we fight
it tears my insides apart
i cry myself to sleep at night
but i don't know where to go from here
the pain it just won't end
for i not only lost my first love
i lost my best friend

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-02-22 09:54 PM

jeni, this is sadly beautiful... full of emotion and expressed well.
take care, janet marie

...every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
every poem and song...
every rhyme and verse...
your still here...like a beautiful curse.
your my inspiration, your my fire...
your words fill me with poetic desire.
Every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
Janet Marie
*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

2 posted 2000-02-22 11:08 PM

Sux when you doubly lose out like that doesn't it? Great self expression. Good job

May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2000-02-23 03:28 PM

Wow jenifeather you really put your feelings down good. Take care, James

childomine
Senior Member

since 2000-01-25

Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL

4 posted 2000-02-23 05:49 PM

Your poem brought up many emotions in me. Love can be beautiful yet so very painful. Sometimes it's difficult to put feelings into words but, you did just that. Thank you for sharing this poem.

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