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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
What I did not tell you hurt you in the end I loved you but never was your girlfriend You asked me out once maybe twice I was cut deep inside by the knife that is so depritly your love Mocked by your beautiful words, that made me cry Tears came just like falling stars on a silver night I never want to return, never want to fight I whisper your name so gently Oh, if I could answer you once again! I dare not speak louder than a whisper I dare not take away from your name You cut with your ruggid dager You bend my heart and soul to accept your apology You try to make me whole For you can not tape my broken heart You can not mend it with a kiss When you ask if I am okay I do not answer I do not speak a word to you Do you notice? I think not I may be wrong but the willing voice peircing my soul can no longer be forever yours I will over come my obsticles I want your love never the less Penitrating my deffences I am commanding my soul not to respond I most live without you Why is my love so blind? "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
WOW!!T,A this one blew me away...excellent...the expression of emotions is perfection... very good work here... take care, janet marie I love you Is all that you can't say- Years gone by and still... Words don't come easily Like I love you, I love you... But you can say baby... Baby can I hold you tonight Maybe if I told you the right words At the right time you'd be mine... Tracy Chapman |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
well writen Tan angel you don't have to understand completely..to love completely... remember even the darkest night has a morning to meet...you'll understand someday..Avanti Rao |
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~Venus~ Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128 |
Great. Must say, you do an excellent job of hiding these emotions...doesn't everyone? Defintely one of your best. ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~ *She loves, she's Love, and yet she is not lov'd* |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Found myself there - in the middle of the turbulant emotions of your poem. I really, really liked this a lot! |
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