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TanAngel
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since 2000-02-01
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Oviedo, Florida, USA

0 posted 2000-02-21 08:30 PM


When the sun touches the moon with the passion of her true heart is when I will plead my case so willingly
When the pain of my broken heart prays so helplessly is when I will share my feelings
When the stars are forever and my wishes come true is when I will kill the everlasting tears
When the soaring sky is promised is when I will speak your name
When the towering mountains comes to a hault in front of my feet and I am now all powerful is when I will confess my pains
And then I will tell you I love you...

P.S. I havn't written in a while, I hope this makes up for it!


 "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel

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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-02-21 10:51 PM


Oh yes!  This more than makes up for it!!  Beautiful words, thoughts and wishes here.  Thanks for sharing this, and welcome home  

 May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-02-21 11:26 PM


well, by the quality of tonites work...I'd say its safe to assume your WELL over your writers block...another excellent one!!!
janet marie

 I love you
Is all that you can't say-
Years gone by and still...
Words don't come easily
Like I love you, I love you...
But you can say baby...
Baby can I hold you tonight
Maybe if I told you the right words
At the right time you'd be mine...
Tracy Chapman



dhuron
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since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

3 posted 2000-04-12 10:02 PM


Wonderful TA,

I don't know what to say, except it was very close. I am going to print this one out, it is so good

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


SEA
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4 posted 2000-04-12 10:07 PM


TA~ this is great! Much strength here.....-SEA
Joel the wolf
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5 posted 2000-04-12 10:08 PM


I agree with Isis, this more than makes up for the short time loss.
I tip my hat.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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