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All Hatred Aside
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All Hatred Aside |
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hostile New Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 6 |
I wrote this poem because sometimes I feel hatred, loneliness, within the world. Love you all, thanks. All Hatred Aside Explode on disorder, no matter the prize Steps on the path the righteous do find Try as they will but they cannot divide Time is relentless, pushing us on Restoring our fate, we never lost sight Spirits evolving. flowing as one Having no limits. all hatred aside Try as they will but they cannot divide To divide, to divide, to divide! Live for the sound loud to survive My will has no bounds to keep this alive Truth pave the way to the world that I know Love for our brothers we'll not fail to show Learn what we hear, see what we feel The air that we breathe could not be more real Spit out bitter pill that made me want to hide Try as the will but they cannot divide Time is your enemy only if you let it be I won't let my future get away from me Listen, let go, out of my mind Out of my mind, listen, let go! There's no compromise Only love me inside I decided long ago I would never be so blind Need to reach, seek to find Will not breach, cannot divide! I am what I am |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Wonderful work and defiance against the fates here!! Bravo!! I'll let you in on a secret, we are never truly alone, look around, a pet, nature's gifts there is always something/someone pleasant to visit. (HUGS) now go from strength to strength  May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
hostile... this is very powerful, and very well written, deep and true emotions expressed very well. I like your strong spirit in this...very good work here!! take care, janet marie "Bring it on baby what you getting into... I swear at once it was the little things that mattered-- But it all seems true to you. Say the hell with my name and say the hell with my picture... but swear, for the one time you need me around. And here I'll stand like it matters... Only once love gets through then gets scattered by the rain... But pain gives me the right to be unkind"... Tabitha's Secret |
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devinmaria Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 130Middletown, Ohio |
Time is your enemy only if you let it be I won't let my future get away from me Listen, let go, out of my mind Out of my mind, listen, let go! that part really hit me hard. as a struggler with depression and the feeling of worthlessness, i need to feel, to think this way. that line "i won't let my future get away from me." very strong!! i'm going ti use that as my motivation if you dont mind. thank you so much. sincerely, aimee Trust I seek and I find in you. Everyday for us something new. Open mind for a different view, and nothing else matters. --Metallica |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
what can i say that hasn't already been said. this piece was full of strength and confidence. confident enough to not let hatred rule you. this is an incredible piece. very well done. (reminds me of a little something i've made up for myself) "if i forgive you, it doesn't mean i have to like you. it only means i accept the fact that i cannot change what has happened. and i refuse to waste my energy hating you." |
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hostile New Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 6 |
I thank you all for you replies. I've always written poems during emotional feelings and always wanted to tell them to someone. I thank God that I have you all. I also want to thank you all including danni for your wonderful, comforting words. You have my love. I am what I am |
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