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TanAngel
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since 2000-02-01
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Oviedo, Florida, USA

0 posted 2000-02-16 04:07 PM


     I
I want to leave
I want to cry
I wish to love you forever with no remorse
I don't know what you feel any longer
I used to know you inside out
I don't know you anymore you are a stranger in my best friends body
I belive in you
I trust in you



 "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel

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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-02-16 07:55 PM


Hope it all works out Tan Angel.  I got one better for you though, believe in yourself first and always  

 At night the moon became a face,
I met the spirit of life,
the spirit of love and music. And I am better for it.
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-02-16 09:23 PM


sometimes we dont recognize someone we know well, I hope it works out...this is a good poem of expression!take care janet marie

 When you look in the mirror...
Wish you were somebody else
Just a perfect reflection
You and no one else...
Minutes run into hours
Hours run into days
You're still waiting for someone
Who never ever came...
Go and run through the hallways
Find your way to the door
You will end up like always
Back where you were before...
Then you look in the mirror
Wish you were somebody else
But it's still your reflection
You and no one else...
Guster


Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
3 posted 2000-02-17 01:45 AM


I can relate only too well to this poem.  
I am sorry to see heartbreak so rampant in the forums of late.  I hope all gets better for you soon.

Michael

ill_tactics
Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 149

4 posted 2000-02-17 03:25 PM


tru, you can never know anyone better but yourself.  Even sometimes yourself may seem so much like a stranger.  Nice piece. Much love, One love, PEACE
devinmaria
Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 130
Middletown, Ohio
5 posted 2000-02-17 03:51 PM


i relate all too well.  it really sucks actually when you fall in love with someone and all of a sudden things change and you dont know if the person you fell in love with can ever return from the person he/she has become.  im in that sitaution and i dont really know what to do anymore.  simple, but then again some of the best things in life are simple.

 Trust I seek and I find in you. Everyday for us something new. Open mind for a different view, and nothing else matters. --Metallica

Bronx
Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 84
Oviedo, Florida, U.S.
6 posted 2000-02-18 07:46 PM


I can definately relate to this poem!  Maybe we're talking about the same person!
Poetically yours
Bronx


 Be careful!
It's a jungle out there!


TanAngel
Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168
Oviedo, Florida, USA
7 posted 2000-02-18 10:35 PM


Bronx...I belive we are, which is REALLY creepy...but thats besides the point...

 "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel

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