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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

0 posted 2000-02-16 12:04 PM


Mindless days and nights,
Spent in subserviance,
Devoid of emotions,
What caused this restlessness?

Looking for things that are not there,
Be they good or bad,
Venturing out from the cowardness,
No security to be had.

No comfort, no haven,
No rest for the wicked they say,
No peace, no tranquility,
For wrong doings you have to pay.

Well I paid my dues,
And paid dearly,
Left with a soul that always wonders,
Too many broken dreams can damage one severly.

So what is waiting for me,
What joys or horrors await?
Lonliness, pain and sacrafice?
I've had all of them I can take.

I'll just continue to wander,
A living mindless entity,
Till someone can show me the truth,
That I am indeed in touch with my destiny.



 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



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JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
1 posted 2000-02-16 11:54 AM


Lonliness, pain and sacrafice?
I've had all of them I can take.


Loneliness Pain and Sacrifice....
We all have had our turns at those emotions.
To feel them is not being devoid...they  make us stronger. Nice depiction Isis.

Jennifer

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-02-16 05:39 PM


Thanks Jen, I know they make us stronger, life is ever teaching.  Glad you liked it  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



~Venus~
Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128

3 posted 2000-02-16 06:32 PM


Isis strikes again! Yet another great one, especially since I can relate...are you a mind-reader? It seems you put into words exactly what I'm feeling now. It just won't seem to go away...great poem!

 ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

*She loves, she's Love, and yet she is not lov'd*

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2000-02-16 07:48 PM


Thanks again Venus, glad you can relate  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



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