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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
imagine creation flowing can you see ideas growing as ice slips by the way imagine hearts meeting central characters Cracked voices reeling imagine old days long ago knights and wizards battle sways to then fro imagine reality without love minds without hearts, souls left eternaly apart imagine you me all in one great ball together in the sky imagine all this and more createing worlds that turn Worlds of the old new and torn imagine all these things all the words that you dont do and tell me what are you imagine power pain and life all on the edge of a knife then you see me, only then you see me |
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devinmaria Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 130Middletown, Ohio |
WOW!! NOT THAT YOU WERE TRYING BUT IM EXTREMELY IMPRESSED. EVEN THOUGH ONE DOESNT WANT TO IMAGINE LIFE THAT WAY, I THINK EVERYONE DOES AT ONE TIME OR ANOTHER. LIFE CAN BE OVERWHELMING DONT YOU AGREE |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Walter... imagine me in awe... this poem is incredible!! janet marie "...we were born before the wind...also younger than the sun... and my heart you have won...as we sailed into the mystic... I just want to rock your gypsy soul- just like in the days of old... and together we will float-into the mystic... Van Morrison |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
Ok can i ask miss Marie which Van Morrison song is your quote from out of interest and i also appreciate all replys even if i dont reply to them if that makes sense I think it is a better tribute to reply to their poems this is what i do And who says i don't try (well i dont really but not trying with emotions certainly drains you) Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace, of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
imagine reality without love minds without hearts, souls left eternaly apart Liked the images you presented here.  Jennifer |
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ill_tactics Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 149 |
This was a good poem. I enjoyed it very much. Did you imagine this poem up? If so, you have great imagination. Keep up all the thoughts, and capture them on paper. Much love, One love, PEACE |
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Lady Bere Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 73Valmeyer, Illinois USA |
This is fantastic! The ideas do flow throughout this poem. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Imagine you on the end of a knife? Not you Walter, you have to much to offer the world. This was wonderful, love it. At night the moon became a face, I met the spirit of life, the spirit of love and music. And I am better for it. ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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