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Dark Poetry #1

i know you

CelticKat
Junior Member

since 1999-09-20

Posts 22
St augustine Florida

0 posted 1999-09-21 09:46 PM

I know you
I embrace your thoughts
With an open mind.
The moon is pulling at us.
You say it is just a figment
Of my heart.
Maybe it is who cares?

You turn away from me Afraid of love.
What is so wrong with me?
What takes the place?
Of love in your soul?

Let lose don't turn away.
I hear the angels and devils
On our lips. We can't hide the
Eclipse of loves expression.
Why do you turn away?
Just let lose.~

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

1 posted 1999-09-22 11:14 AM

Welcome Celtic Cat....
This touched my soul...

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Helewes

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

2 posted 1999-09-25 01:19 AM

I like the feel of this...and this line: "The moon is pulling at us.
You say it is just a figment
Of my heart."..awesome!

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"We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?"
--John Keating, Dead Poets Society

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