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mojar Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169granbury, texas, usa |
fire goddess lying here with book in hand, a blanket warms my feet. the fire dances and calls my name, alone and incomplete. flames jump and whisper to me, as a goddess comes alive. a glow about her passioned face, as she stares into my eyes. stepping from the embered coals, she slides along my side. and beckons me to come to her, and lay my book aside. drink within my pleasures sweet, she softly speaks to me. feel the warmth i have to share, come and sip my luxury. make sweet love by the light i give, be drunkened by my wine. the flames of passion rising high, as our souls become entwined. the fire fades about the room, my goddess slips beneath the coals. i grasp the blanket and smell of her, staring blindly at my soul. mo. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
WOW!! this one Excellent!!!..so full of imagery and expression, you must be very inspired this weekend Mo...both of these poems are SO good!! I feel like I was sitting by the fire this one is so decriptively written. take care, janet marie In the time we've known That we each are a part of one another We've lost as much as we have won... And as our lives have grown We have found that it only brings us pain To hang on to the things that we have done... ***Still I love the times you've come*** Jackson Browne |
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mojar Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169granbury, texas, usa |
thank you janet marie, i don't know if inspired is the word, this is everyday mental imagery for me. all i do is close my eyes and describe what i see, i am glad you liked them both. mo |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
stepping from the embered coals, she slides along my side. and beckons me to come to her, and lay my book aside. Beautiful and so perfectly visual  Jennifer |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice, this makes me want to find a fireplace to light up. James |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Gosh, this is beautiful, moving, warming and yearning. I absolutely adored this your winter's fantasy. Bravo Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Bronx Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 84Oviedo, Florida, U.S. |
wow- I really liked it Poetically yours Bronx Be careful! It's a jungle out there! |
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mojar Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169granbury, texas, usa |
i want to thank all of you for your comments, a romantic setting indeed, ah, a dream we all share, thanks again mo |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
LoL at jmlee! anyway, what more can i say that hasn't been said already. warm and sensual imagery, soft flow, a beautifully ramantic fantasy. one of your best. Something has to change. An undeniable dilemma. But I am not a burden anyone should bear. -Tool- |
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mojar Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169granbury, texas, usa |
thanks danni, i knew you would like it. mo. |
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