navwin » Archives » Dark Poetry #1 » pot of gold
Dark Poetry #1
Post A Reply Post New Topic pot of gold Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
mojar
Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169
granbury, texas, usa

0 posted 2000-02-13 11:05 AM



pot of gold

lost in the darkness of the shadows,
that cover my eyes.
continuously looking through,
the tears that i cry.

looking for that glimmer of light,
that so easily escapes me.
hoping to find a rainbow at the end,
relinquishing it's pot of gold.

and you are that pot of gold,
embracing me in a wealth of love.
sharing the warmth within you,
spreading colors through me like fingers.

absorbing me with emotion,
fulfiling my appetite for love.
quenching the thirst,
that has forsaken me for so long.

i break free of the darkness with you.

mo.

© Copyright 2000 mojar - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-02-13 12:32 PM


MO...I LOVE this poem...its beautiful with emotion!!! very lovely expression and sentiment,great work.
janet marie

 ...found your heart-then lost your lover...licked your wounds then run for cover...
take your time...there will be another...
and dont make the same mistake twice...
unless you can pay the price...
Dan Fogelberg



danni
Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
2 posted 2000-02-14 10:59 AM


'tis an incredible feeling when you find one that can bring you out of the darkness. wonderful work mo.

 Something has to change. An undeniable dilemma. But I am not a burden anyone should bear.
-Tool-

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Dark Poetry #1 » pot of gold

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary