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hathor
Junior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 17


0 posted 2000-02-12 07:13 PM


Death is just a
sharp golden blade
tearing straight through
your heart, splitting
in into two
making sure that
you will never
become whole again.

© Copyright 2000 hathor - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-02-12 07:31 PM


In certain perspectives this is true Hathor.
Well done.  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-02-12 07:56 PM


wow hathor!
powerful statement in so few words!!!
take care, janet marie

 ...found your heart-then lost your lover...licked your wounds then run for cover...
take your time...there will be another...
and dont make the same mistake twice...
unless you can pay the price...
Dan Fogelberg



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