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Neala
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since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA

0 posted 2000-02-11 07:03 PM


Simple little minds
Think of sweet dreams
Thoughts of perfect lives

Will all be destroyed
With one evil
One bad thought

People are always runny
Cause they can't hide
Cause they get caught

Day brings light
Night brings habick
Sweet dreams little one


-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)

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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-02-12 01:06 AM


I hope not.. ie I hope all is not destroyed from one mere thought.
The title reminded me of "Sweet Dreams" by the Eurythmics.  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



Sorceror52
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since 2000-02-12
Posts 2

2 posted 2000-02-12 02:06 AM


Wow Neala! I like it.  Its short simple and very direct.  Imagine putting a child to bed to this.  I don't think it would get much sleep.  Haha, just kidding.
~Venus~
Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128

3 posted 2000-02-12 07:45 AM


Another great poem, depressing, by Neala. You write so well, it's a pity that they seem to harbor evil thoughts. But hey, whatever inspires you!

 ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

*She loves, she's Love, and yet she is not lov'd*

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