Dark Poetry #1 |
Sweet Dreams |
Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA |
Simple little minds Think of sweet dreams Thoughts of perfect lives Will all be destroyed With one evil One bad thought People are always runny Cause they can't hide Cause they get caught Day brings light Night brings habick Sweet dreams little one -Neala (Goddess of Sadness) |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I hope not.. ie I hope all is not destroyed from one mere thought. The title reminded me of "Sweet Dreams" by the Eurythmics. Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Sorceror52 New Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 2 |
Wow Neala! I like it. Its short simple and very direct. Imagine putting a child to bed to this. I don't think it would get much sleep. Haha, just kidding. |
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~Venus~ Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128 |
Another great poem, depressing, by Neala. You write so well, it's a pity that they seem to harbor evil thoughts. But hey, whatever inspires you! ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~ *She loves, she's Love, and yet she is not lov'd* |
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