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Drawn...towards you?
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Drawn...towards you? |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
Drawn towards you... < !signature-->You walked towards me smiling...I’m strangely excited You seat yourself beside with poise that reminds me of... Then introduce your common name...differently... While you talk I glance through your eyes...listening... Am I drawn towards you...? I don’t want to show... My restless mind …erased the memory...or I forgot But time tends to bring you back again... Down the noisy hallway I see a familiar face... I find myself finding...I wasn’t earlier You ask how I am…it’s been a while Am I drawn towards you...? You’re being paged... You invite me to watch I accept readily... Hurried steps to the clinic…with situation explained I watched you in action...are you always so good? Am I dancing in the rain...?I feel my heart glide... This unusual feeling...after years has come back... Drawn towards you...your inside... you don't have to understand completely..to love completely... remember even the darkest night has a morning to meet...you'll understand someday... Avanti Rao [This message has been edited by AVANTI (edited 02-10-2000).] |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
beautiful words of rekindling love. very nice piece here. Something has to change. An undeniable dilemma. But I am not a burden anyone should bear. -Tool- |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Warm and wonderful feeling put to verse very well, Avanti. A very enjoyable poem. michael |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Avanti... I LOVE THIS POEM!!!!! its so great...I totaly realted to this one...certain people get under our skin...or so deep in our soul that they stay with us for years...sometimes it not a bad thing... and its always the best inspiration for our poetry.(smile) janet marie ...baby, dont you work so hard for this prize you found... it will all be gone when you turn around... cause ... nothin' lasts forever anyway... Rick Roberts-Windmills |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
thanyou janet...for always encouraging me for reading my verses like you 're hearing me out... ((((((((hug)))))))))) see you around you don't have to understand completely..to love completely... remember even the darkest night has a morning to meet...you'll understand someday..Avanti Rao |
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