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~Venus~
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since 2000-01-27
Posts 128


0 posted 2000-02-09 05:28 PM


You burned my heart once,
a time I'll never forget.
Now,
you move closer to me and
I feel the burning
Desire
I felt before
and again,
you have burned
My heart.


 ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

*She loves, she's Love, and yet she is not lov'd*

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Bronx
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since 2000-01-28
Posts 84
Oviedo, Florida, U.S.
1 posted 2000-02-09 05:53 PM


Hey-
I liked it a lot.  If some one burns you repeatedly tell them your problem!
Poetically yours
Bronx


 Be careful!
It's a jungle out there!


TanAngel
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since 2000-02-01
Posts 168
Oviedo, Florida, USA
2 posted 2000-02-09 09:20 PM


  oh, I've read this one too...still purple notebook right? I think I might even remember the date of this entrie  gigles . Ok well I still like it. Wow, I remember telling you that too!

 "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel

AVANTI
Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
3 posted 2000-02-10 12:28 PM


The burning heart goes on...


 you don't have to understand completely..to love completely...
remember even the darkest night has a morning to meet...you'll understand someday..Avanti Rao



Michael
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
4 posted 2000-02-10 08:05 AM


I wonder if somehow we set ourselves up to be burned...  Such a shame when one is only giving of their heart,  great poem, can relate well.


Michael

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