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~Venus~
Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128


0 posted 2000-02-08 07:02 PM


Once upon a time
I loved you and
you loved me.
How and why did it end?
It was all so sudden...
so many years went by,
yet still I loved you,
unknowingly,
and you loved me.
Finally the day came,
when we met again,
but our fairy-tale life was gone.
Once you were my Knight in Shining Armor,
but now that armor
is rusty and dull.
How can we retain our fairy-tale life?


 ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

*She loves, she's Love, and yet she is not lov'd*

© Copyright 2000 ~Venus~ - All Rights Reserved
danni
Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
1 posted 2000-02-09 11:06 AM


not all tales have happy endings. someday a knight will appear with armour much grander than the one before.  

 Something has to change. An undeniable dilemma. But I am not a burden anyone should bear.
-Tool-

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-02-09 11:20 AM


fairy tales live in our poetry...
another great poem Venus!!
janet marie

 "...she said I dont know if I've ever been good enough...I'm a little bit rusty...and I feel like my head is caving in,
and I dont know if I've ever been really loved- by a hand thats touched me, and I feel like somethings gonna give...and I'm a little bit angry...
Well...this aint over..NO not yet...not while I still need you around"...
matchbox 20


gypsyqlt
Member
since 2000-02-08
Posts 147
Bradford,Vt USA
3 posted 2000-02-09 01:53 PM


Oh baby, I know of what you speak !!!
Jocelyn

Bronx
Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 84
Oviedo, Florida, U.S.
4 posted 2000-02-09 05:55 PM


Yes-
I agree with danni.  It is better to love and to have...Well you know the rest!
Poetically yours
Bronx


 Be careful!
It's a jungle out there!


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