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~Venus~
Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128


0 posted 2000-02-08 06:58 PM


At first,
I had my doubts
about you.
Whether you were even real...
or too good to be true.

As time went on,
I grew comfortable
with you.
Learned your faults,
and saw that you were real,
and very much human.

Now I see
that you and me
were meant to be.
Through day in and day out,
you were there for me,
even when I didn't believe.
And now, to return it,
I'll be there...


 ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

*She loves, she's Love, and yet she is not lov'd*

© Copyright 2000 ~Venus~ - All Rights Reserved
Keli1019
Junior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 31
FL
1 posted 2000-02-08 07:08 PM


I loved this poem! It reminds me so much of a certain someone.  

 "It takes a minute to have a crush on someone, an hour to like someone and a
day to love someone- but it takes a lifetime to forget someone."

TanAngel
Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168
Oviedo, Florida, USA
2 posted 2000-02-08 08:41 PM


He he he...I hope their human

 "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel

gypsyqlt
Member
since 2000-02-08
Posts 147
Bradford,Vt USA
3 posted 2000-02-09 06:51 PM


How tender, and warm...I like it a lot.
Jocelyn

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