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Dark Poetry #1

Love's Deciet

~Venus~
Member

since 2000-01-27

Posts 128

0 posted 2000-02-07 05:46 PM

I'm afraid
of falling
into that hole
called Love.
Love has many names;
Deceit, Hurt,
Passion, Desire.
All of which
I am
afraid of.

Can't you tell?
Isn't it painfully obvious?

~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

TanAngel
Member

since 2000-02-01

Posts 168
Oviedo, Florida, USA

1 posted 2000-02-07 06:33 PM

Sorry to tell you but people don't know what you feel unless you tell them. Unless of course...uh...nevermind.

"Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel

Jannel
Member

since 2000-01-18

Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA

2 posted 2000-02-07 11:31 PM

Very much like the "love has many names..." thing. Good poem!
jannel

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

3 posted 2000-02-08 04:47 PM

Fall in love anyway, if only for the passion and desire. Some risks must be run!
Good poem!
DH

Keli1019
Junior Member

since 2000-02-02

Posts 31
FL

4 posted 2000-02-08 04:58 PM

I thought this poem was reallly good! I really like the end..."Cant' you tell, Isn't it painfully obvious?". I thought that part was cute!!

I can't wait to read your next poem!

"It takes a minute to have a crush on someone, an hour to like someone and a
day to love someone- but it takes a lifetime to forget someone."

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