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~Venus~
Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128


0 posted 2000-02-07 05:46 PM


I'm afraid
of falling
into that hole
called Love.
Love has many names;
Deceit, Hurt,
Passion, Desire.
All of which
I am
afraid of.

Can't you tell?
Isn't it painfully obvious?


 ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

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TanAngel
Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168
Oviedo, Florida, USA
1 posted 2000-02-07 06:33 PM


Sorry to tell you but people don't know what you feel unless you tell them. Unless of course...uh...nevermind.

 "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel

Jannel
Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA
2 posted 2000-02-07 11:31 PM


Very much like the "love has many names..." thing. Good poem!
jannel

Danny Holloway
Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
3 posted 2000-02-08 04:47 PM


Fall in love anyway, if only for the passion and desire.  Some risks must be run!
Good poem!
DH

Keli1019
Junior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 31
FL
4 posted 2000-02-08 04:58 PM


I thought this poem was reallly good! I really like the end..."Cant' you tell, Isn't it painfully obvious?". I thought that part was cute!!   I can't wait to read your next poem!

 "It takes a minute to have a crush on someone, an hour to like someone and a
day to love someone- but it takes a lifetime to forget someone."

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