»
Archives
»
Dark Poetry #1
»
Acid Rain!
| Dark Poetry #1 |
|
Acid Rain! |
|
|
faith Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 89 |
Silent acid rain you owe me nothing , For the last time you emerged it bought only pain, When your ran through those hidden valleys of my very being, You lit me up on fire, I was wiped away clean. Silent acid rain your owe me nothing, I stopped loving you ages ago, Your touch is darkness , a slow poison, Your beauty is gone ,your winds have grown slow, Like old times , now, when you catch me by surprise , Cool tears on my dead skin feeds me only lies, Silent acid rain your owe me nothing, I gave away my secrets, naïve I was , only to feel shame, Moonlight whispers , shared agonies is all a bleak past , nothing's the same. The last time you came ,a stranger you seemed, for my soul you killed! A saint you are called , pure and gentle , but you too have secretly sinned, Ooh silent acid rain….in your glassy dreamy structure blood is all I see, You had me dreaming . longing for love , but hate was all you reaped, Years ago when you came , you brought gifts of hope and smiles, Now as those dark clouds gather …fierce and hungry, My salvation , today , once again dies.. Oh silent acid rain , you owe me nothing… For once long ago , your soft feathery touch , gave me life, wanting more of your fiery feel, You have lost your magic , your holy powers , to think you could help me heal! I discard you like a forgotten tommorow , on me you have no claim , Basking in glory , I bathe in the sun , I m free of you , oh cruel rain! Touch me once again and I will die for all times, oh sinister rain, 'Cause that's what water is to a dying dancing flame!sf |
||
| © Copyright 2000 faith - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
once again, incredible. the words reel you in and don't let go. i could relate to this well. well done! Something has to change. An undeniable dilemma. But I am not a burden anyone should bear. -Tool- |
||
|
Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
Wonderful comparison image. My favorite parts were "cool tears...only lies" and "a saint...secretly sinned." Words as art... Jannel |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
