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Gradually you waste away your life....
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Gradually you waste away your life.... |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
and gradually sleep is the overdose the need of the buried...almost where you die not once but twice the pleasure of existence was never this fanatical about life.. as a deer knows fear in the grasp of headlights so shall you..broken embers your a fallen star you speak with clarity but you'll never get quite that far.. |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
dark and dooming. but great none the less. i enjoyed it. Something has to change. An undeniable dilemma. But I am not a burden anyone should bear. -Tool- |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
"you speak with clarity but you'll never get quite that far"... this is very good, very expressive. It does speak with clarity and you did get that far with this one... take care janet marie ..."when you walked into the room...I saw their faces--- did you know--you made it seem like time was standing still... and I felt---fascination...though I only knew you then--just casually... then you slowly turned and smiled in my direction... and my heart gave me away".... Glass Tiger |
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