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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
The soul of my heart burns with every step you take Is the reason for my tears Is the goal of my life To keep burning If you give up My hearts flames will die The wind of your moving on keeps my soul alive Yet the wind of another burns brighter "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel |
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Keli1019 Junior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 31FL |
Once again! Another great poem!! I think I know where you were coming from, but I loved the poem nonetheless! Keep up the great work! "It takes a minute to have a crush on someone, an hour to like someone and a day to love someone- but it takes a lifetime to forget someone." |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
a nice poem indeed. i too think i know where you are coming from. loving one who has love for someone other than you? if that is it, i know how you feel. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
beautiful poem, short on verse..but full of passion and emotion...loves desperation... very expressive. janet marie ..."when you walked into the room...I saw their faces--- did you know--you made it seem like time was standing still... and I felt---fascination...though I only knew you then--just casually... then you slowly turned and smiled in my direction... and my heart gave me away".... Glass Tiger |
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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
Danni, no for once I am the one moving on... I wish it were always that way.  |
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~Venus~ Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128 |
I do know where you're coming from...sometimes moving on isn't good...don't even ask me about that because I will not tell you...nor anyone else... ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~ |
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