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Neala
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since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA

0 posted 2000-02-05 08:48 PM


You tell me how my life is
How it is going to end
Then you know somthing about me
Then you wanna tell the world my little secret
You hold my life down with pain
I start to fall apart
I feel like a million pieces
You are stronger and stronger
You feed off of my pain
You seem as if you enjoy this
I start to give up
I question my own life
I have almost lost hope
People tell me to never give up
They more I here from
Eveyones point of view the worse I feel
I don't care what poeple think
I stand here trying not to fall apart
I am to scared to stand
I fall and you still are strong
Then I leave this world and you
Will be stronger

-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)



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Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-02-06 01:44 PM


Neala,
this is SO good...sadly beautiful and poetic, your poems tell me..you are stronger than you know...take care janet marie

~Venus~
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since 2000-01-27
Posts 128

2 posted 2000-02-07 05:24 PM


Neala--
I know where you're coming from. I too have felt the pain of another getting joy out of my pain. Good luck...

 ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

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