Dark Poetry #1 |
Adriel Hurts |
Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA |
You tell me how my life is How it is going to end Then you know somthing about me Then you wanna tell the world my little secret You hold my life down with pain I start to fall apart I feel like a million pieces You are stronger and stronger You feed off of my pain You seem as if you enjoy this I start to give up I question my own life I have almost lost hope People tell me to never give up They more I here from Eveyones point of view the worse I feel I don't care what poeple think I stand here trying not to fall apart I am to scared to stand I fall and you still are strong Then I leave this world and you Will be stronger -Neala (Goddess of Sadness) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Neala, this is SO good...sadly beautiful and poetic, your poems tell me..you are stronger than you know...take care janet marie |
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~Venus~ Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128 |
Neala-- I know where you're coming from. I too have felt the pain of another getting joy out of my pain. Good luck... ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~ |
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