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The Jackal
Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 2000-02-05 01:04 AM


nothing drowns out everything
something keeps on happening
and always alone
builds itself a better home
and a better time
who knew..loving yourself
could make this whole agony
satisfy itself...until you waste away
and lead yourself to unwind..

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Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-02-05 12:40 PM


..."and always alone
builds itself a better home
and a better time"...

this is VERY good...a profound message said in so few words...wisdom shared...the gift of poetry.
take care

 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-
remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
Janet Marie



danni
Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
2 posted 2000-02-05 03:54 PM


a strong message indeed, i enjoyed it very much. nice work.

 Something has to change. An undeniable dilemma. But I am not a burden anyone should bear.
-Tool-

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-02-06 08:52 PM


Words of wisdom, mistakes we can make.  Message noted by me at least!!  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



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