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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA 
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I long for you I need you By my side I feel my life falling Around me I can't hold it togather When I realize How much you effect me I am suprised The way we stay As much as I need you Trying not to need you -Neala (Goddess of Sadness) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Neala, this is very good, I related to this...needing someone in that way...I love the last two lines... perfect thought to end the poem. Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding- remain the most beautiful words ever heard. Janet Marie |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
This flows so well. So well, I had to go back and read it again!  Joy |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
It's like my soul was saying this, as it has in the past. Wonderful work Neala!! Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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DayDreamer Junior Member
since 2000-01-16
Posts 30 |
Hey. I know how you feel. ((but not exactly how you feel, because I'm not you)) I have someone I need too...but...well...you know the story. Anyways, great poem. I like the style. ^_^ DayDreamer |
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