Corner - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

TanAngel
Member

since 2000-02-01

Posts 168
Oviedo, Florida, USA

0 posted 2000-02-04 03:55 PM

      Corner
   I sit curled in a corner
   Surrounded by walls of your words
   No way to escape
   No way to hide or run
   Just shut into a corner
   I watch the cold words move in closer
   Closing my eyes
   Telling myself to be brave
   The image gets worse with every breath
   Every sigh and thought
   Feel as though your stabbing me
   Over and over  with the icy steal blade
   Of your heart

"Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-02-04 04:12 PM

very emotionally descriptive poem,
sometimes anothers words do hurt us like this,and inspire us to write about it too.
very good work. janet marie

Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-
remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
Janet Marie

TanAngel
Member

since 2000-02-01

Posts 168
Oviedo, Florida, USA

2 posted 2000-02-04 05:02 PM

The words that I heard the night I wrote this were the hardest and saddest words I had ever heard/said. For saying good-bye to my first true love was the scariest thing that ever happened to me...Thank-you Janet Marie

"Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel

Bronx
Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 84
Oviedo, Florida, U.S.

3 posted 2000-02-04 05:57 PM

Hey!-
If you ever need to talk you know where I am!
Poetically yours
Bronx

Be careful!
It's a jungle out there!

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

4 posted 2000-02-04 06:08 PM

I too have been pushed into that corner you speak of.  There are two things that can be done, both take courage.
1.  Quietly stand up and walk away..
2.  Find the strength to fight back, not with screaming or accusations, but a few well chosen, quietly spoken home truths.  Both ways are winning ways.
If you need to talk hon, please feel free to email me anytime.

Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.