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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
I scream so loud I silence myself I need no pain killers, I do not feel For I am only an illision created by the darkness of my heart I do not love I do not pray I am alone Tearing away from myself Tearing away from my soul "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
I feel this way sometimes...good poem...keep it up okay?? |
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Keli1019 Junior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 31FL |
This is a great poem. It really describes how many feel at times. I'm looking forward to seeing some more of you poetry, because your poems really express your thoughts and feelings, especially some of my feelings. ;-) Keep it up!! "It takes a minute to have a crush on someone, an hour to like someone and a day to love someone- but it takes a lifetime to forget someone." |
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DayDreamer Junior Member
since 2000-01-16
Posts 30 |
I know what it's like to tear away at your heart. Just keep on fighting. Great poem. DayDreamer "Keep hope, for a candle in the strongest wind will still give light." |
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Bronx Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 84Oviedo, Florida, U.S. |
Yeah- I know how you feel. Or should I say don't feel! Poetically yours Bronx Be careful! It's a jungle out there! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I know how you feel too, it's hard to feel crushed under tonnes of twisted metal and emotion. But you must fight the nothing, and ever strive towards the light and the love. Email me if you need to talk. Great poem, enjoyed the imagery  Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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