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mojar Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169granbury, texas, usa |
clouds speak in skies of blue, billowy soft voices whisper of you. gently rolling up and down, drawing me ever homeward bound. ever changing, reaching to me, longing to set my spirit free. lost in thought, i think of you, as i watch the clouds in skies of blue. every cloud shows a wondrous trace, of the beauty held within your face. reaching, stretching, with clouds aloft, i whisper i love you ever so soft. me |
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DayDreamer Junior Member
since 2000-01-16
Posts 30 |
I really love your poem mojar. I can say that it did bring up some topics in my life...but it moved me, none the less. Beautiful writing. DayDreamer |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
mojar, beautiful poem full of lovely imagery... love puts our heads in the clouds sometimes..doesnt it..(smile) take care, janet marie Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding- remain the most beautiful words ever heard. Janet Marie |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautiful Mojar, I loved this. But what do clouds say????? I'm not being smart I wondered if you could tell me, I'd love to know what they say. Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Bronx Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 84Oviedo, Florida, U.S. |
Yes!- I loved the whole cloud and whisper thing. It was really really great! Poetically yours, Bronx Be careful! It's a jungle out there! |
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mojar Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169granbury, texas, usa |
thank you janet marie, day dreamer, and bronx, i am glad that you related in some way. and isis my dear, the clouds say whatever you want them to say, just listen and you will hear, they are such an inspiration in themselves. thanks mo. |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
mo- I think you outdid yourself on this one. A perfect image of romance, soft and beautifull. I enjoyed this very much. Something has to change. An undeniable dilemma. But I am not a burden anyone should bear. -Tool- |
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