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The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 2000-02-03 11:09 PM


suck in the hate
suck in the pain
suck everything that you crave
suck up your superficial underlying fear
suck up that feeling
suck up that reason
suck it up entirely
till it gives you some reason for living..

© Copyright 2000 John Dixon - All Rights Reserved
armanca
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 211
Tennessee
1 posted 2000-02-03 11:22 PM


Please tell me...Does it work???


Carman

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-02-04 12:18 PM


strong emotions in this poem, sometimes we do try to "suck it in" and not let the things that bother us show. Im always grateful to write about it and get the feelings out that way...good work
janet marie

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-02-04 08:07 PM


Suck it in, examine it, then exorcise the hate and anger.  That is the secret.  Well done  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



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