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~Venus~ Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128 |
My life has been torn apart ripped to shreds and yet, it's strangely comforting to find you standing there. what's true is now an illusion pulled over your eyes to fool you mess with your head what I thought was an illusion is now true I now know the truth everything has changed... an illusion... ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
love's illusion...how true...love blinds us, this is very good. I enjoyed it. janet marie Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding- remain the most beautiful words ever heard. Janet Marie |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I too enjoyed this Venus. Honey being new, you may not have read all the forum rules. We try to limit our posts to two per forum in a 24 hour period. It's great you have four, perhaps you could post two here and two in op5. I know the rule bites at times, but it's a goody and fair to all. Thanks Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
How true. At times, life and all of it's glories seem but an illusion. Especially when we encounter those who are deceitful. They tend to make us question everything we thought to be true and good. Something has to change. An undeniable dilemma. But I am not a burden anyone should bear. -Tool- |
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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
Great poem! I don't know if you mean that love is an illiousian or not like Janet Marie said, but I know what your talkin' about... "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
Sometimes it takes a lie to find the truth..an illusion to see reality... your poem remined me of that... thanx...it was so true |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
Sometimes it takes a lie to find the truth..an illusion to see reality... your poem remined me of that... thanx...it was so true Even the darkest night has a morning to meet... Avanti Rao |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is great...I really enjoyed reading this!! Thanks!! Take Care Bridgette Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved." |
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