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~Venus~ Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128 |
I look at you through tortured eyes I let myself close them as I feel your arms slip around my waist and your lips gently press to mine. I open my eyes and look to the sky the thousands of stars, the thousands of wishes I've made to be with you ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~ |
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summer Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 80long beach .ca.usa |
oh venus i feel this way everytime i kiss my new love...thank you for allowing me to feel him thru your poetry....keep up the good work.. |
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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
Great poem! It speaks for itself, as a lot of poems do! Therfore I have nothing more to say except great poem and keep up the great work! "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
You have captured the feeling of new and better love well. I too feel this now, after five years of looking through tortured eyes, and only seeing heartache and pain. It is refreshing to open eyes of new hope to find new begings. |
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Bronx Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 84Oviedo, Florida, U.S. |
Great- I like this poem a bunch. Sometimes love just works out like that! Poetically yours Bronx Be careful! It's a jungle out there! |
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