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~Venus~
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since 2000-01-27
Posts 128


0 posted 2000-02-02 07:24 PM


I keep my feelings
locked up
in a bottle
inside my heart

the cork is sealed tight,
never to be opened
only the strongest of hearts
can reveal the true me


 ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

© Copyright 2000 ~Venus~ - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-02-02 09:54 PM


very nice...your poems reveal you as well
janet marie

 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-
remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
Janet Marie



Bronx
Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 84
Oviedo, Florida, U.S.
2 posted 2000-02-03 05:10 PM


Yeah-
Maybe you should let out some of your feelings, but only to the ones you trust the most.  If you let your bottle get too full it might burst and hurt you and everyone involved.  We all need to let out our feelings sometimes.  Thats why I like this place soooo much!
Poetically yours
Bronx


 Be careful!
It's a jungle out there!


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