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~Venus~ Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128 |
I keep my feelings locked up in a bottle inside my heart the cork is sealed tight, never to be opened only the strongest of hearts can reveal the true me ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
very nice...your poems reveal you as well  janet marie Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding- remain the most beautiful words ever heard. Janet Marie |
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Bronx Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 84Oviedo, Florida, U.S. |
Yeah- Maybe you should let out some of your feelings, but only to the ones you trust the most. If you let your bottle get too full it might burst and hurt you and everyone involved. We all need to let out our feelings sometimes. Thats why I like this place soooo much! Poetically yours Bronx Be careful! It's a jungle out there! |
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