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Auricom45
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 19
Hialeah, Florida in the U.S.A

0 posted 2000-02-02 06:41 PM


Invisible
You won't see me
Staying to see your anger
You won't see me
Holding this grudge any longer
You won't see me
Cry my tears
You won't see me
In so many years
You won't see me
Fighting all your battles
You won't see me
Telling you that it matters
You won't see me
Living a lie
You won't see me
To say goodbye
You won't see me
Hiding in the darkness
You won't see me
To see a boy so worthless
You won't see me
To take my last breath
You won't see me
So solve of what's left




 "We have bigger houses and smaller families; more conveniences, but less time; we have more degrees, but less sense; more knowledge, but less judgement; more experts, but more problems; more medicine, but less wellness. We have multiplies our possessions, but reduced our values. We've learned how to make a living, but not a life."

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Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-02-02 06:48 PM


this is awesome,
strong in emotions and self strength, I really like it...and I cant remember if I said this to you already..but your signature is very good...very true.
janet marie

 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-
remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
Janet Marie



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