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Bronx
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since 2000-01-28
Posts 84
Oviedo, Florida, U.S.

0 posted 2000-02-02 05:34 PM


The One I Look Up To


No one knows
I look up to you,
But I do,

Know one knows
I want to be your friend,
I wanna be with you 'till the end,

No one knows
Who you are,
But to me you're a star,

No one knows
How much your on my mind,
You're on it all the time,

No one knows
How much I care,
Do you ever notice my stare?

No one knows
That I need your friendship,
I need it through every hardship,

I know
I can't have it,
Even though I want it,

I know
What people might think,
It would be a secret we'd have to keep,

I know
You think I'm crazy,
Sometimes my views are a little hazy,

But I'm positive I would
Never hurt you,
Never lie to you,
Never do anything wrong,
If only you liked me,

Because...

No one knows
I look up to you,
But I do!


By Bronx

This is dedicated to
a friend I may never have.




 Be careful!
It's a jungle out there!

© Copyright 2000 Bronx - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-02-02 05:37 PM


Beautiful Bronx.  Friends, true friends are all to precious and rare,, when you find them, never let them go.

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



TanAngel
Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168
Oviedo, Florida, USA
2 posted 2000-02-02 05:49 PM


  Hey, great poem!! It shows a lot of emotions that you wouldn't really think one of your friends had. I hope that person may notice your stare if they havn't already.

 "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-02-02 06:25 PM


Bronx,
this is poem is great...and full of emotion,
i'm sure your friend would be touched to know you feel this way...share the poem!!
take care, janet marie

 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-
remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
Janet Marie



~Venus~
Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128

4 posted 2000-02-02 07:12 PM


I agree...show your friend. I'm sure they'll love it...I do.

 ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

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