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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
Sunshine You said I was your sunshine That she didn't matter, that the sky wasn't blue You said I took away from the sky, that I could make the most depressing color the perfect shade of happiness Well, you lied... If I am all that you say, what is she? She must be the sun "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel |
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Keli1019 Junior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 31FL |
You're poem is really good. It comes from the heart. Keep up the great work! I wish I could express my thoughts and feelings as well as everyone in this board does! =) Maybe I will post a poem or two. ;-) |
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Bronx Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 84Oviedo, Florida, U.S. |
Great- This poem is a great description of how love and friendsip can go wrong. Not that that is a good but it was a nice poem! Poetically yours Bronx Be careful! It's a jungle out there! |
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