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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio 
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hi yall i'm gonna post this poem here but its not really dark. its the only kinda happy poem that i ever wrote. i wrote this for my ex girlfriend. 2 weeks later she broke my heart. thats when i wrote that bottom of a glass poem that i posted earlyer. she didnt just break my heart or my spirit, she scared my soul for life.  oh well just another heartache in my messed up life. tell me what ya think. hope yall like it.SHOOTING STAR As I look out my window At the stars up above I think about you My one true love I love you with All of my heart I miss you like crazy When were apart But when were together I'm floating on air Flying above the clouds Without a worry or a care When i look Into your eyes All i can do Is fantisize About holding you forever In my arms Hugging you tightly And protecting you from harm Your to good to be true Your the girl of my dreams I love you so much I could burst at the seams Your as pretty as an angel And sweeter than wine I thank the lord everyday That you are mine As I look out my window And stare at a far I make a wish Upon a shooting star To be with you For all eternity Together forever Just you and me..... Jesse C. Jaymz True beauty is often hidden in darkness... ~Jesse C. Jaymz~ |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Don't worry about the whole non-dark thing...people (like myself for example) post happy stuff here every now and then. ((inspirational hugglez)) I know how ya feel cause I've been there but you'll be alright...and someday you'll find someone that is worth your time and love. I'm not very old but their are just some things that I know.  Great poem...very heart-felt. "They can take away my belongings. They can beat me. They can torchure me and they can kill me. Then they will have my dead body. But they will not have my obedience." -Gandhi ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Oh, but I am very old *G* I'm ancient !  But I know this about love....it comes and it goes, sometimes making you happy and sometimes leaving a gap and if you're real lucky, you'll find a life time Love. Lovely poem though |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I'll go with Munda's comments on this one, and a beautiful Jesse Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
You will learn to love again. The sheild that you might want to hold up you need to put down. I know you will return to the wordl of love...and make an enterance that was greater than your first "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish" |
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lost Junior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 16New York, NY |
I can relate to this poem and love how you expressed feelings I have felt. I'm looking forward to reading your other poem, I hope it's still posted! |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Jesse, I enjoyed this piece. It represents unscathed Love. Jenny |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
wow. i must thank yall for your support. everyone has been so nice. and i would also like to especaly thank isis. you have been a really good friend from my frist post. i will e-mail you later. and just to let yall know, i have found that specal person. and i love her very much. but that heartache has left a scar on my heart that will forever be there. *sigh* but i will move on. well i have rambled on and bored yall long enough. thanks again yall. it is much appreiated. True beauty is often hidden in darkness... ~Jesse C. Jaymz~ |
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