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AVANTI
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE

0 posted 2000-02-02 02:45 PM


       Far And Beyond...any doubt...?

Far and beyond any doubt I was always with you...
Far and beyond any doubt I looked deep within you...I saw a light.... I saw a STAR
Far and beyond any doubt I was smiling even through the storm.
Far and beyond any doubt I shielded you from all I could...
Far and beyond any doubt you never saw me standing for you...
Far and beyond any doubt I trusted you...with all I had
Far and beyond any doubt...the storm has hit me...and I am still stuck in it.
Far and beyond any doubt...You left me standing all alone
Far and beyond any doubt you knew each time you bruised my heart...
So I looked again...Within you...this time deeper...I searched your soul...
I could not find the light...and the star...
Far and beyond any doubt I stood still and looked up above...I saw the stars and moon   They all were shining...up above
Far and beyond...you cheated me all through the way...I have no doubts...
Far and beyond any doubt I see a smile...deep down your heart
Far and beyond any doubt the winds of change are blowing...and they are taking me where I want...SO FAR AND BEYOND






  
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Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-02-02 03:35 PM


Avanti
I LOVE this one too...you express your emotions so well here...
and for my own personal pleasure...may I say that I am happy to see someone else who embellishes their work using--(...)  
I've always done it when I write...caused many a fight in Creative Writing class...LOL...drives my daughter nuts...
oh well... take care janet marie

 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-
remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
Janet Marie



AVANTI
Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
2 posted 2000-02-10 01:54 PM


janet...
i'am happy to see the ... in your poems too
pondering to much...
see you around

 you don't have to understand completely..to love completely...
remember even the darkest night has a morning to meet...you'll understand someday..Avanti Rao



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